fullfrontal.

i'm sick of being subtle.
i'm going to be subtle as a heart attack.
going to smash my head into the wall
and spit blood in your face
i'm sick of cryptic answers
all i want is the truth
your soul spilled out onto my alter
i want to know your everything
without having to pull teeth
i'm sick of subtlety
and playing coy
i want it cold and hard
brutal and honest
give me your honest answer
tell me to go f**k myself

Reviews

[wicked.wanderer]

I think if you had used the word 'subtle' one less time, I would love this to death.
But one of my largest pet peeves in poetry is the repeat of words, unless, of course, the format requires you to repeat a word.
I think if it's a great word, twice is more than enough in the poem.
But this is all my opinion, so meh.
I still love it.

[S. J. Fisk]

I will use this when I come upon a person who likes to play all those god damn head games that some little b*****s enjoy so much. I will, of course, give you full credit, but it's SO F*****G TRUE!!!!!!!

I hate it when people tip toe around and never say what they actually mean. WELL DONE!