The Love Of My Life

A promise of undying love and lifetime commitment in romantic rhymed verses.

The most wakeless desires of my soul without refrain
I elatedly reveal unto your spirit
still our torch song's flames retain
today we hail a paradox more real than how we bear it

I beg of you to discern selflessly
amongst all the most significant thing
at last the time has come so please heed my wish intently
with sheer mirth I call your name and its splendor does ring

I hang on to the light that shed its brightest side
I possess within me a zeal indomitable
I still have all the stint and so I bide
the rescript to wait for you I am more than willing and able

with a storied rush we solemnify our orisons without fear
I promise you now and always treasures shall be rife
out of all whom I hold dear
evermore shall you remain as the love of my life


-Brandon Joseph [

Reviews

[KriticalError]

This is really beautiful, I'm not usually a fan of poetry - Unfortunately my horrific English Lit' teacher saw to that in college, but this was really sweet to read :)

[Brandon Joseph]

Hey that's so gracious of you, I'm not really good at any other literary handiwork but peotry. I tried doing a blog [ http://thesubtlearttraction.blogspot.com ] but not so sure if it's goo enough to serve its purpose. lol I look forward to read your works too and will surely drop by to leave some constructive review. :) Thanks again.

[Brandon Joseph]

Hey that's so gracious of you, I'm not really good at any other literary handiwork but peotry. I tried doing a blog [ http://thesubtlearttraction.blogspot.com ] but not so sure if it's goo enough to serve its purpose. lol I look forward to read your works too and will surely drop by to leave some constructive review. :) Thanks again.