Nobody knows?

Nobody knows?

The moon is broken tonight,

 It has that stupid crack.

The wind, a bit too cold,

The night, a bit too black.

The stars are stealing away their glance,

Trying to escape my confrontation

Of broken trust,

Look how some have become so dim!

And some are hiding behind

Those clouds of dust.

The trees have bowed down,

And they are whispering quietly,

"We don't have the answers you need,

But we do feel pity."

And then there are those little flowers,

Who have closed their eyes,

In innocent hope of being passed by unseen,

I guess even they don't know,

Why we hurt,

Why life gets mean?

There is lightening in the sky,

But the rain seems to be in a fix,

Wondering maybe, what would it say,

If I ask for answers I long?

What blunder did I commit,

Where did I go wrong?

A few birds are flying here and there,

Mocking my inability to fly

And reach elsewhere.

Somewhere,

 Where old friends don't turn their faces away,

Somewhere, 

Where the night is as faithful, as the day.

Author's Note

This is highly exaggerated I know!
Wrote it just for fun!
Thoughts are welcome :)

Reviews

[The Surrealist inside ...]

Exaggerated .. I dont think so .. This is beautifully written ..
Let me be a little more familiar with my Guitar and I promise I will sing this to you ..
It is that beautiful .. Its more like a Progressive rock Song ..
I loved it .. Thanks for making me Read it

[Surya]

You were cool here, description was fine. Great job.

[Penny]

It is a beatiful piece, almost a visual potrait presenting the bittersweet nature of life. Very nice.

[B.S. Scarpa]

Your poetry shows emotion. I love the part about And then there are those little flowers,

Who have closed their eyes,

In innocent hope of being passed by unseen,

I guess even they don't know,

Why we hurt,

Why life gets mean?

It speaks tons of what goes on in the world today.

[Aya]

you're a talented writer, great poem

[Odayin]

Things will always be different to you than they will be to the people you share it with. What you see as exaggerated, obviously a lot of people see as perfect. This is really nice, I could almost picture everything that was going on, and then it seemed like I could picture you writing. Quite a good poem, I liked it a lot, keep up the great work

[MOON]

Lovely write , all the stanza's very good but like :
And then there are those little flowers,
Who have closed their eyes,
In innocent hope of being passed by unseen,
I guess even they don't know,
Why we hurt,
Why life gets mean?

[may]

No exaggeration at all ! :) Its absolutely beautiful ! :D Keep Writing ! :D

[AK]

It is not exaggerated, it is amazing! I absolutely loved it! Keep writing!

[Akshat♥]

My favorite lines " I guess even they don't know,
Why we hurt,
Why life gets mean?"(Flowers)
This poem shows your high level of imagination..
I don't think you wrote this just for fun..
you have these feelings in "U"...
You just want to know in which way they are going..
According to me ..you are going pretty far..
Really nicely done..Keep writing!! :)