Orchard old

Pain transforms people

Mellow rotundity has been garnered
Now, for you I wait, come to me

save me from pining away

taste me.

Reviews

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very thought provoking and profound. Good write

[Suhd]

Thanks a lot.

[Zoya]

I really like your word choice here. The lines certainly do have an air of melancholy to them. Reminds of the typical autumn.
Not sure if I deciphered what you exactly wanted to say, but I definitely got a rough idea. Beautiful work.

[Suhd]

Thank you so much Zoe. It's basically melancholic.

[LuciusGray]

Can you possibly tell me of your intended meaning with your First line? Do you mean Melancholic Inactivity leading to a Physical Transformation of sorts. Psychological Apathy leading to Physical Lethargy? And why does the poem end so abruptly

[Suhd]

Yeah, basically it's about transformation gained with much pain. The first line is bout balance in life you know, the poet is sane like his beloved wanted him to be. There's an extremely sad undertone once you get to that layer and I think when you get there this doesn't seem abrupt. Thanks for stopping by, appreciate it :)

[LuciusGray]

Fair enough, Elgy

[Mr. Lopez]

Yearning for a connection is what this poem conjures in me when I read it. We all seek that connection and are deserving of such. Nice work.

[Suhd]

Thank you...! This yearning is keeping us alive.

[EcstaticEuphoria]

I love title that you gave this poem, really captured the sensual essence. This poem was so simple, yet so sharp. Fantastic job! Keep sharing!

[Drowning In Reality]

Lovely. Again, thought provoking. Well done.

[Suhd]

Thank you so much!

[Stacy Purvis]

Sexual, sensual undertone...beconing. Love it. Thank you for sharing.

[Suhd]

Thank you so much :) You're welcome !

[Isabella Ivy]

Exquisite piece :) My family owned orchards and they are near my heart. Thank you for the share :) I.I.

[Suhd]

Orchards are so cool :)
Thanks for giving it a read :)

[Isabella Ivy]

You're most welcome :)