Hope

I’ve changed. I think it will last this time.

 

I am done with caring. If I creep you out or say something wrong, then go ahead and just f*****g walk away. It’ll only show who’s a real friend.

 

SO here we go, I’m going to try to be honest and keep this carefree attitude. To start off, here’s a poem I hope will inspire you.

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You sing a song of hope,

That’s what the friend said,

Just look through the mope,

And see the sunny days ahead.

 

You can fly free,

Unlike so many others,

Over land, over sea,

May you turn haters into lovers.

 

I’ll leave you now,

But know only this,

You must never bow,

To the seduction of Pain’s gentle kiss.

Author's Note

This wasn't going to be a poem originally, but nothing ever turns out the way I plan. Oh would you look at that, I'm taking myself to a higher place :)

Reviews

[Erin Thomas]

It's a nice kind of verse to oneself. I really like the intimacy of the writing. I really like what you did. Great job! Keep it up!

[darkness*star1985]

I feel for yea, I myself is feeling like This. I like the words, the movement in your writing, good work.

[The Watcher]

Really interesting write! For some reason, it kinda reminds me of myself in a way. Meh... nonetheless, wonderful poem and kudos to you!

100/100

[Sophie]

I love this, and I see what you did there with the first line ;)
Great poem, I love the preface to it too :)
The last line is perfect

[Amanda]

thanks friend

[Persephone]

I love the last line -we do bow to pain's seduction - well done

[afra]

i like it ....i always wanted to write something about hope but i think you did it better then me

[Amanda]

yeah right! you're one of the best writers I know!

[afra]

aw thanks but i think we both are good ..okay

[Amanda]

okay :P

[Rhea752]

this poem is a great expression of hope. i really enjoyed this piece!!! Keep writing!!! :)

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I like the last line a lot. Great job

[Amanda]

Thanks dude