Fade Away

I’m not good enough.

We’ve already been through this.

I am neither weak, nor tough,

Just an invisible little wisp.

When I finally fade away,

Only a few will be upset,

But they will quickly be okay.

They won’t notice, I bet,

They never did before,

But I don’t blame them.

Far from flashy like the clothes they wore,

More like a frayed hem.

My candle light is burning low,

Saying I wont just snuff it out is a lie,

A light would be nice wherever I’m about to go,

But it won’t stop me, this is our last goodbye.

Reviews

[Kenaz]

Good, almost a sonnet.

[Amanda]

Thank you :)

[Rachelll]

That is sooo good! I love that!(:

[Amanda]

Thank you :)