Jealous

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Just look at her,

Everybody loves the way she looks,

Always pretty, never unsure.

Love comes to her like moths to a light,

Only she could ever be enough

Under your burning sight,

Such beauty keeps us hidden in the night…

Author's Note

argh I can't get this to come out right so here it is. Probably doesn't make any sense but that is a-okay with me

Reviews

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

This is beautiful! I think we all know someone like that.. That girl who looks flawless and has guys all over her.. A girl that every other girl envies.. Beautiful write, Amanda (:

[Amanda]

shank ya :)

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

No problem (:

[PP]

Nice..

Always pretty, never unsure.

A lot of sense in this little piece, well done:)

[Ahmad Cox]

I actually like the use of the word in the poem