Fail

You take more than I can give,

Seems like you're never satisfied.

I just want a life to live,

Just want one mistake ratified.

When the world is in flames,

You point an accusing finger,

And its always me to blame,

So I never care to linger.

No matter how hard I try,

I always f*****g fail.

Everything's just a lie,

Oh look another coffin nail. 

I don't know what to do,

I feel like I'm insane,

I'm trying hard to be shiny new,

But its always the same old brain. 

You will always best me,

We all know this is true.

Understand I f*****g see,

How little I am compared to you.

So as I stand here oh so high,

I let out one big sigh.

For this is my only goodbye,

I know you won't be satisfied. 

Reviews

[Jordan's Back]

Wow This is incredibly deep and sorrowful this is. Wonderful write

[Richard Morimanno]

very nice and disturbingly true in todays society, happens to more people than anyone would like, nice job Aamanda and good flow

[Amanda]

Thanks :)

[revalatia]

dude, ...where to start. First of all, nice work. I dig the way in which you styled your rhymes.. Seems someone is always trying to one-up you somehow (or at least we think they are) whether it be family, peers or coworkers. What sucks is when you finally prove yourself or think you are...nobody even pays a-f*****g-tension you know? lol sorry.. buzzed
in conclusion:
:)

[Amanda]

Yeah I get it thanks for the review :)