Tales of a Daughter

Something I wrote to get over some writer's block

You've hurt me, it's true,
 And I can't forgive you,
The price is too great,
 There is too much hate,
But to help understand,
 I'll tell you your hand.

You've broken a lot,
 leaving my blood to spot,
Your words sting,
 Your lies even more,
I can forgive all of that,
 Even calling me fat!

You left me in the dust,
 Just a broken bust,
Loving him more than me,
 And draining me out like afternoon tea!

So when you say you love me,
 I doubt it, can't you see?
I don't say it back,
 You've left too many a crack,
So stay with your lover,
 Really, do I need you, Mother?

Author's Note

I know it's not the best, but I couldn't put it into any other words. Review!

Reviews

[Jordan's Back]

Oh my Goodness.........

[Amanda]

Is that good or bad haha?

[Jordan's Back]

Its an excellent write just a speechless content!

[Amanda]

Thanks :)

[Steven Cash]

hmmm real nice

[Sophie]

I loveee the last stanza, the last line is like a slap in the face to your mom, great write. also "You left me in the dust, just a broken bust," I like that too :)