My Bad

I'm alive!

My bad! 

I have lost all that once I had! 

Amorphous 

my dreams, my words, vain now to fuss. 

Yet they were 

my friends, my fiancees, my everything I swear. 

It's strange 

now I can only hope for a miraculous change. 

And if not 

I'll play myself down, I'll let it rot. 

My bad! 

Yet I am not as I should be as sad 

Maybe it wasn't something real, just some fad! 

My bad! 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Great poetry. Direct and honest words made the poem a pleasure to read. I like the ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sukriti Suki]

I found the rhyme a little bit overwhelming but I like the idea here...deep.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

short and poignant, well done

[Priyanka Natesh]

There,there,it ain't that bad..yeah it just was some fad!The key is to shun the feelings and to move on..
Good work though :)

[ErinLovesYou<3]

Ahh well, it happens to the best of us. All you can do is keep your head up and move on. Nice job.