In time you will regret .

Stereotyping, labeling

No loving, just hating


You were my friend to change me,

I became who you wanted me to be.


But you didn't expect what happened next ...

I fought back! and you know the rest.


You think that, you still control my life ...

But your words only pierce through the air like a knife.


So go ahead, wear your new designer jeans,

We all know the old, worn out ones are better.


So go ahead, say something to criticize me,

The words I hold onto will not come from you.


In time you will regret ...

That your faded words are all you have left.

Reviews

[Marina]

This is amazing.
I loved the ending and the the way it flows.
This is a very good poem.

Great job on the sweet write.

XxStaySweet,
Rinaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

[Kriss]

Damn right sister ! my actual non-biological sister ! loveeeeeeeeees you !
anyways, I like this, it's great...it's totally true as well.
Good choice of words, I like the description :)

♥Kriss

[Lori]

Very biting. I love the ending in particular. I think the poem could go even deeper and give insight into the friendship with one line about why you were drawn to the person to begin with. Well done!

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

Wow! i love this piece!!! i really do.... it's so true. so many people can relate to this piece. Everyone wants to change everyone and thats not okay. we are who we are, no one is perfect no one will ever be perfect... This is beautifully done! and I love the way you did it, great formatting!