You Put The "Art" In Heart

this is a lot more epic in my head. everything is actually...

You put the “art” in heart my dear
And the tear in my eye
I fear, I sinned in loving so

There’s beauty and there’s grace
In every freckle on your face
But you shall never know

Author's Note

there's actually more to this poem, but I just like the first 2 stanzas...
maybe after I clean it up you can have the rest. =P

Reviews

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Very cute writing. And like Joe says, great meaning behind your words!

[Joseph - Michael]

Naw, there's no need to clean it up, because there are so many great deal of meanings lie withing the words that you've used for this piece, so it's perfectly fine... Sure, the others may think it's incomplete or such, but they're missing the facts that there are always perfect meanings behind the imperfect writings...

On the other hand, it's all still good tho...