On Love

Simple piece

On love

How so close is your soul with mine,

I am sure everything you think goes through my mind.

 

I am with you anytime and everyday

Not like a host caring for you at a feat alone.

 

With you I am glad

Whole times

The time I offer my life

Or the time you gift me

 

And the moment

When you are all confused

Leaps forth a voice

Hold me close

I am love and

I am always yours

Author's Note

Any comment appreciated..

Reviews

[tracey]

hi, im quitenew on site just reading some of your writes this was great piece really romantic it had me drawn in , i see you write alot of love, romance i like that theme too. I will be reading some more

[Insight "MH"]

lovely heartfelt emotions, well done!

[Indu]

hi,
'how so close is your sole with mine' after reading this my heart was stopped for some times.
no more words.

[V]

I found some nice lines in this one but honestly, I think some lines, in comparison, read a tad off like not matching or maintaining the actual pattern. I don't even really get this line " Not like a host caring for you at a feat alone". Doesn't make that much sense to me. Hope you don't mind my straightforwardness.

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing poetry for love.
"I am love and
I am always yours"
I liked the above lines. Perfect ending for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Sunrising]

Thank you so much for reading... !

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Emily Murman]

This is absolutely gorgeous! So tender and intimate.

[Sunrising]

Thank you for reading... !

[Ana B.]

A simple yet uplifting and tender writing. Lovely done :)

[Sunrising]

Thank you for reading.... :-)

[Alfred Kukitz]

A feel of poetic honesty layered in the rich red colors of the heart.

Regards,
Al

[Sunrising]

Thank you!

[SZHZIA]

It is your good start to compose poems. It is full of honest emotions and feelings that made me happy... The last lines are so touching for me... It really stolen my heart... I sing it again and again... Thanks you so much for sharing it...
Best
Szhzia

[Sunrising]

Thank you, Szhzia, for review and your encouragement. I am glad you liked it......

[SZHZIA]

It is my pleasure......

[wordman]

the feelings of love as they cover the soul

[Sunrising]

Thank you for reading and reviewing it.......