Coming into the light!

I was inspired by some poets on this site to try writing a short poem but still getting the point across...

My heart is in hidding

I'll force it into light

If you know you'll never love me

Don't let me put up this fight

Author's Note

I'm taking a chance with this one!!!!!!

Reviews

[Fy Cecilia]

Awesome!
Straight to the point.
And, grr... I totally get it.
People should be up-front about what they want.
If you only want the icing, don't ask for the whole cake!

[misha]

I really like this poem. I love how you tell the one you love "if you could never love me don't make me go through this." Great job!

[brenda]

i love this !!!! can relate to it a lot !! this always happens to me !!:) nice :)

[Yina]

Simple yet so touching and totally gets your point across. It really hurts when they lead you on:(
Very good write:)

[Truth_About_Rain]

Short but beautiful

[Sukriti Suki]

Nice deep and well written. I would like to suggest to take off the exclamation marks in the end....it leaves with an after-taste of surprise rather dark deep thoughts. But it is personal choice. I like this short piece. Great Depth.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Very punchy, very powerful.

[Ladysue]

love the title and the message in this short gem...wonderfully done..

[Nicky Wilson]

DBWOY!! *inside joke* :P loved it as usual. I think its about hiding your feelings or not hiding it so much but just fearing that you put heart into something or rather someone and you're unsure of their feelings idk did I get it right ?? lemme kw inbox me!

[Stephanie Slayer]

Absolutely wonderful!