Closed off to me

A Poem by Dreamer

My first Haiku

Your mind is closed off,
This rainy night I'll sneak in,
I just want my heart...

© 2011 Dreamer

Author's Note

This is my first Japanese Haiku, lines are 5-7-5. I have never followed a strict rhyme scheme before. This was pretty challenging to tell a story while keeping within this strict 5-7-5 scheme.

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Added on December 9, 2011
Last Updated on December 9, 2011

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Dreamer

Private, Trinidad and Tobago

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