Creature, more the less Human...

Heartless creature whom leads a lonely life. Loved by no one hated by all. Trapped behind my obsessions. It feeds off the negative energy given in societies conspiracy of hate. Controlled by no one it walks alone. It sticks to the shadow's and memories unwanted. Out of reach forbidden of any communication, Peice of the earth more that of scum. Unforgiven living in it's filthy lies. Societies downfalls based on my actions. Choosing them carelessly it's still breathing with eyes wide shut. Does it even know what the meaning of life is yet? Why did we give in to the rotten darkness, betrayal by its closest enemy's. once the people I loved more than anything.  We could've forgiven but chose not to. Hating seems so much easier Than to love. Our soul feels as if it were dipped in acid. Expressionless eyes and movement, immortal to all those mortal.  It's blood was once warm and flowed with dignity. Now is cold and still. We sit in silence. Always blinded to see the good by choice. Continuous loneliness and misfortune. We are sick. I am not a creature. "It" is  a part of me. So "we", "I", and "It" are just like you.

                         - Sarah

Author's Note

Very dark. Maybe emotional. Sorry. Hope you enjoy.

Reviews

[Joseph - Michael]

Don't ever apologize for any of your writings. We all write what we think and feel; We all read, then think and feel. That's the way we are. If anyone like your writings, they'll either say something or they don't. If any of the readers didn't like what they read, they should keep their mouths shut and move on.

Anyway, as for myself as a reader, all I can say that it's pretty good. A bit too short and it feel like it's missing something. Other than that, it's still good tho...

[The Tangent Trailblazer]

Don't apologize for your creation! It is very dark and very emotional! And you would be surprised at how many people on the planet today who can identify with your poem. And even more surprised at how many more may or may not have identified with it had they been given a chance to live. Great work!