Self-control

You are here and so am I,
I wanted it to be this way,
But as for what you thought,
I couldn't honestly say.

I made you believe,
What I felt was the same.
I take you to the room,
I'm content and nicely tame.

You tell me how you feel,
I don't say a single thing.
There's a final silence,
Around my fingers a piano string.

This is best for us both,
I couldn't further express the tole,
Caused by you it's not my fault,
As simple as a lack of Self-control.

Reviews

[Psyche]

WOW!! I know I say this a lot when reviewing your work but you never cease to amaze me. Your work is just plain awesome!! I have to say this though and it's just a bugaboo of mine, you really should first put your work in a word program and put it through a spell check and then put it out on writers cafe because you have a few typos in each of your poems. I'm sorry and I really don't have a lot to speak of because I have grammar problems in my writings but spelling was always my strongpoint, but to give you a hint(and you can tell me to take a flying leap) it's believe, not beleieve. Okay sorry, other than that I love your writing and have no complaints! GREAT JOB, KEEP IT UP!!!