Sincerely Your's,

You've stripped me emtionally,
Only if I'd been a little bolder.
The world cold and heartless,
Is now laughing on my shoulder.

I take time from this day,
To recollect the thought's and pain.
You've caused quite a breakdown,
Me killing you'd be in vain.

I want you stripped of confidence.
I want all you're happiness taken.
I would love to see you crying,
I want you Violently shaken.

Trying to sleep I'm tossing.
Trying to think with thoughts racing.
I couldn't be good enough in your perfect life,
So you threw it away and told me I was crazy.

Well I took it to heart,
I started my "crazy" thinking.
If it weren't for your brave words,
You might've still been breathing and blinking.

Author's Note

Love has a way with the mind. (When it's over)

Reviews

[Honeypot]

Hey! Great ending. I like the way its bursting with emotion. There's lots of pain - both yours and wanting to inflict a little in return. I'm not sure why some people find it easier to break things off if they call the ex a psycho, but seems like a lot of people do it. I like your reply. Great job!