Silence

The mind clears out and all you hear is your heart and your breath...and things are clear

words after words,
I have become silent,
Just like these words,
That are silent in themselves,
I wonder, 
Are these my words?
Or am I of them?
Relationship i find none,
I am them,
They are me,

My friends take them as a hug,
And she takes them as my kiss,
They know me through these all,
And these all through me,
I wonder,
Do they make me,
Or do i make them,
Creator i find none,
I nourish them,
They nourish me,

Words after words,
I have become silent,
Just like these words,
That are silent in themselves.
I wonder....

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

this one made me think and giggle at the same time.. silence is a wonderful time to "wonder"... I like the contrasts and repetition throughout.. it really adds to this piece... the flow and construction of this one is beautiful... such thought-provoking simplicity... another nice one... you write well...

[Sunya]

Yea i dont like using flashy words :) i'm kinda childish :p thankyou for your kind words April :)

[AprilRN1210]

I don't see ANYTHING "childish" in your writes... and some of the best pieces I have ever read didn't have "flashy words" in them... I will repeat previous statement--which I wholeheartedly stand beside---YOU WRITE WELL..lol so nah! :)

(ok... maybe that last "nah" was childish...ha)

[Sunya]

Being childish is fun :D so effortless in looking at the world with a certain purity :) Thankyou for your kind words 'again'..It means so much coming from an amazing playful writer like you :D

[AprilRN1210]

it is fun to be playful and "childish" at times, yes.. you're welcome again. and awwww, thank you..

[Akshay]

Anything that takes you to a whole different place while reading is a win for me, and you've won remarkably.

[Sunya]

You enjoyed :) thats a win for me :)) thankyou

[Frontier]

You have transcended the realm of words and they have transcended you....:)

[Sunya]

Momentarily I felt so just after meditation but still transcend is a strong word :) you are too kind :)

[Frontier]

haha!! Or maybe I just like the word...but if one believes things are possible... ;)

[Sunya]

Today I was wondering what it would be like to understand everyone completely without a word passed between :) guess that would be transcending ;)

[Frontier]

haha sounds like an interesting thought :P