The Sweet Ambiguity

Conversation of the divine

The sea asked the moon,
HOW REAL IS YOUR LIGHT?,
While the sun is asleep,
i hardly trust my sight,
reflection aren't you,
just the yellow of the white,
or sweet benediction are you,
behind the relaxing twilight,

OH! fireless glow,
free me from this trust-untrust,
walk me doubtless in your sky,
as you guide me home,,,,

i hate to squeeze and expand,
my heart to your shapes i imitate,
the shadow of the shadow am I,
or a light traveling through candles,

The moon said to the sea,
IM NOTHING BUT THE WAVES IN YOU....

Reviews

[Kenneth Nicholas Lowe]

The end is amazing.....I'm nothing but waves in you...brilliant...

[Sunya]

Thankyou :) I am glad you enjoyed it :)

[Frieda P]

Love the title, and your sweet benediction in honor of shadow'd darkness come to light. Last stanza is killer.

[Sunya]

Thankyou Frieda :) haha killer? :p
I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

[Frieda P]

Killer is par excellence! :) Pleasure was mine....

[Frontier]

Interesting, I really like the ending, I don't think there could be a better response from the moon. :)

[Sunya]

Hehe yea the moon is good with her one liners :p