Wakeful Dreams

everyday morning i guess :p

Lucid awakening,
Vibes, Music, Breathing....
Neutral Psychology,
A comfortable bed to be,,,,,

Glimpses, glimpses,,,,,
Pictures in motion,
Breaking and bending,
continuing in circles,,,,

Subtle sensations,,,,
Perception overshadowed,
Clear vision,
Observation uncontrolled,,,,

Endless, Endless,
Moments in tandem,
Cohesion of the random,
elongating in chains of freedom,,,,

The sound of the door,
Opening swiftly, sloooow-w-l-ly....
The quirky sound,
Hidden iteration,,,,

Mindless, Mindless, Mindless....

Reviews

[Briana O'Connor]

WOW! This left me almost breathless. A truly beautiful expression of dreams and awakening. I felt as if I was stuck in the middle there with you. The way you repeated words at the beginning of each verse added greater emphasis to the emotional impact of the piece. Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed the read.

[Frieda P]

Oh this just floats down the page, I just want to sail away within this mindlessness. Excellent!

[Sunya]

Thankyou Frieda :) sail away you can ;)

[wordiggerone]

You caught the state 'in tandem' in a very introspective way. Creation of the mood is faultless. So good, Sunya!

[Sunya]

Thankyou :) I am glad you enjoyed :)

[Frontier]

This was sooo relaxing, ahhhh loved it!

Made me feel like I was actually lucid-sleeping. So cozy but yet enthralling.

[Sunya]

I am glad you could feel it :) thankyou

[AprilRN1210]

oh my goodness! the flow of this is awesome... the emotion, the imagery is brilliant and describe so well... this is awesome... I cannot believe it doesn't have a million reviews by now.. well done...

perfect! I thoroughly enjoyed this...

[Sunya]

I am glad you enjoyed it :) thankyou :)

[AprilRN1210]

you're welcome, it was my pleasure..

[Sophy Freebirds]

Ohh wow!! Great self introspective piece.. firstly awakening then sensations followed emotions and leaded by glimpses...indeed a thought provoking write ;) keep writing

~Sophy

[Sunya]

Thankyou for your kind words Sophy :)