Splendour of Spring

"Life stands before me like an eternal spring with new and brilliant clothes" Carl Freidrich Causs. The beginning of spring marks the start of everything new and beautiful. This is a season of colour.

Dancing through the sunshine,
breaking through branches bare
it’s forever a delight to see you
walk in with colours so pretty and rare.

Delicious green grass, blooms soaked in red
birds humming everywhere, enjoying nature’s fest.
your boundless beauty is a feast to the eye
your world is brimming with smiles, laughter and jest.

I wish I could be like you dear Spring
the abundance that your flowers bring,
filling life into everything!

Author's Note

Waiting to know what you think

Reviews

[Ashwin Shanker]

Well written. Spring is a beautiful being.
So is summer, so is winter, so is autumn. Each with its own colors. Each with its own light.
Such is the beauty of the world. It is in the diversity.
Let love flow to all seasons. To all beings. To all experiences.

And let more beauty flow through your fingers, to our hearts :)

[Surabhi Kaushik]

Wow! Ashan even your review is a poem in itself. Thanks so much for the review.

[Lauren]

You may have just made Spring my favorite season of the year! "Dancing through sunshine," I loved this simile, as if spring itself were a person just awaking from a long winters nap - reveling in the fact that the sun is now able to radiate its warmth up them. You are a great poetic visionary!

[Karmee]

I like this, thought it was awesomely written

[Surabhi Kaushik]

Thank you so much. It's always encouraging to get reviews

[Faith2993]

Good job! I wish it were longer :D I'm eager to read a poem about Autumn, my favorite season.

[Surabhi Kaushik]

Thanks. That gives my fingers some work to do. I know where to find my muse!