For You...

Just words of my depressed heart...

English Version:

I wanna fight with the world,
With tears as my weapons,‎
I may win or lose.

If I lose still I win 
As my love carved
Her beauty in my heart..

But if I win,
It's all my love 
In my life...
.......

True words:

Dil ki aasu se duniye se ladunga,
Pata nahi aage haar hai ya jeet,
Agar haar bi gaya,
Majnu ke dil mein laila 
Ka chehra toh hai....
Agar jeet gaya 
Mera saath mera dil ka pyaar hai.‎

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

That's interesting! I like how how you translated the hindi version in the english one! Quite smooth! Nicely penned, Surya! :)

[Surya]

Thank you Yumna...:)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome! My pleasure :)

[Najam Us Saher]

I love your spirit for love. Amazing

[Surya]

Thank you for your kind visit..

[Najam Us Saher]

No need of thanks. :)

[Surya]

Hahaha...sure brother, friends rite..

[Najam Us Saher]

I am a girl

[Surya]

Hey am so sorry, l'll confused with your name..sorryy

[Najam Us Saher]

It's okay...

[Tazeen Ahmed]

You nailed it, truly!
I enjoyed both the Hindi and the English version of it.
"I wanna fight with the world,
With tears as my weapons,‎
I may win or lose."
A way to keep writing :)

[Surya]

Thank you Tazeen for your kind visit..:)

[Valentine]

If you win, all my love, in my life. Valentine

[Manasa.L]

khoobsurath masha allah, kya likhavat hai
Manna padega ji apki dil ki baat
lekin apni aasu ko yun kisi bhi baat par na behanao
kyunki uski bhi kemath hai ji

[Surya]

Keemath toh hai, laila ke liye behne me kushi bi hai..
Thank you Manasa, Lots actually, For your mesmerising words and your kind visit.

[Manasa.L]

Shukriya kehne ki zaroorath nahi hai, ek dost hi toh doosri dost ki madad kartha hai

[Surya]

Hanji, Thank you for making me as a friend.

[Manasa.L]

You are welcome

[Aishwarya Prem]

Beautiful lines!! The hindi version caught my soul !!! Keep writing more :)

[Surya]

Thank you Aishwarya for your kind visit.

[Bala Gorthi]

English and Hindi versions both are equally beautiful.
Bahut khoob Likhe Surya! Maza aa gaya. Keep sharing.

[Surya]

Thank You Bala ji, For your kind visit and appreciating.

[Bala Gorthi]

You Are welcome.

[APOORVA]

beautiful
very nicely written

[Surya]

Thank you Apoorva..:)

[APOORVA]

most welcome..keep up

[Farhan Shaikh]

Amazing words in both the languages..Well I liked it in our native language the most..

[Surya]

Thank you Farhan for your kind words..:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words.
"I wanna fight with the world,
With tears as my weapons,‎
I may win or lose. "
I liked the above lines. Win or lose. The effort is the important task to be done. Thank you Surya for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Surya]

Thank you John for your kind words.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.