Journey Of Life..

Journey of life 
When seeped deep
In heart blossoms a
Generous smile from 
A feeling unknown

When lessons engraved
And feelings graved
Paves a way to celestial life
Worth of billion butterflies and
The Scorched emotions which
was once a fad of humanity...

When a soup of charisma
Dries and dies, oceans 
Of tears rained and flown
Starts a journey which was
Once known but now unknown
Leading to a cave of my own.

Reviews

[Kathleen Montgomery]

Interesting idea. Nice way to spend time. It took me to a place I feel I needed to go today. Interesting imagery.

[Tony Jordan]

I love the intensity Surya. Keep writing and dont stop writing - unless your hand gets sore then STOP immeadiately and RICE it (Rest, Ice, Compress, Elevate) xD
well done

[apennylate]

ROFL... Saw this on my feed just now... Skimmed half of it, saw the "RICE it", and looked at my cabinet holding the rice cooker... Was like, what an odd suggestion... Does that increase ones writing ability? Lololol... Then I read the rest... Still... It was worth that 3 seconds of mystification

[Tony Jordan]

'RICE it!' is the new 'Just Do it!' lol
xDD

[apennylate]

I.. I feel silly, haha... But I thought maybe... Maybe TJ knows something about Rice I do not...
read moreI.. I feel silly, haha... But I thought maybe... Maybe TJ knows something about Rice I do not...

Just Rice It!

[Tony Jordan]

Rice Fun Facts: Rice is the seed of the grass species Oryza sativa (Asian rice) or Oryza glaberrima (African rice). Rice is the oldest known food that is still widely consumed today. Archaeologists can date its consumption back to 5000 BC. There are three types of rice grain: short, medium and long.

xDD

[apennylate]

Rofl.. If that was off the top of your head, you remind me of a very good friend I used to have, Tj, and if you looked that info up... Well... You still remind me of him, hahahaha... Crazy critters, you be...Thank you for the rice fun facts, lmao...

[Tony Jordan]

The only thing to come from the top of my head is dandruff Silente - Google is our friend lol. Welcome xD

[Surya]

Oh, Sure Tony, I won't stop and If I, I follow the RICE, thank you guys for making it lengthy....:)

[pragya gaur]

Nice one...Great.... Awesome creativity

[Surya]

Thank you so much Pragya...:)

[Bala Gorthi]

Very true indeed. You have described the journey of life very well in its different shades.i loved all the three sections equally. Very well written piece, Surya. Thank you for sharing.

[Surya]

Thank you so much Bala....:)

[Anjali]

Nice! It's really good and thoughtful and so creative! Loved the way you framed the words. I'm sorry I'm reviewing this a bit late. Beautiful piece indeed!

[Surya]

Hey that' ok..n no need to be soory...am quite thankful for your visit...:)

[Anjali]

You are very welcome!

[apennylate]

A soupy charisma... Life is indeed a journey... Charismaticly penned...

[Surya]

Indeed it is..Thank you Silente for your kind visit...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and strong words dear friend.
"When lessons engraved
And feelings graved
Paves a way to celestial life
Worth of billion butterflies and
The Scorched emotions which
was once a fad of humanity... "
I loved the above lines. Realistic view of life. Thank you Surya for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Surya]

Thank you so much John....am glad you liked it...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear friend.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

journey..so when ur in a journey maybe u wrote this.
good work su.
keep writing.
keep travelling.

[Surya]

Yes, you guessed rite....thankyou so much dear...:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

always a pleasure...i din't guess it though.

[Mr.Writer]

An adventurous poem on life...
It was very engaging, clear and honest...
Well done Surya, keep it up!

[Surya]

Thank you Shaan..:)

[Sandipta$]

Lessons engraved n feelings graved... Wow..... Nice Lyn..... ur thoughts r amazing... God bless u.... Tinnu

[Surya]

Haha, nice name btw, Thank you so much dear friend...am glad you liked it...:)

[Sandipta$]

😊 be hpy...........