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Destiny in life is
A spark of magic,
A denizen unknown, and
Manoeuver of mistakes

Certainity is a threat
And a treat for retreat,
Truth is harsh but loyal
And a weapon a knight wears

Beauty is concealed
Words whispered are
exuberant that said life is
A smile of uncertainity

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem shared my friend.
"Beauty is concealed
Words whispered are
exuberant that said life is
A smile of uncertainity"
The above lines, real and true. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Anjali]

Your poems are usually short but they are very meaningful. And the words that you use are simply beautiful and they feel so authentic. I loved it!

[Surya]

Thank you so much, Anjali...:)

[Anjali]

you are welcome.

[Najam Us Saher]

It seems that you are understanding life and its ways more now than ever.
Honest words...

[Surya]

It's a huge book, I just have started it....Thank you Saher..:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You are welcome.

[barleygirl]

I love the way your message wanders a little bit, but it seems to begin & end with the idea that uncertainty is better than stifling certainty. I love the way you play with words & ideas. You are nicely quixotic in saying: why not let go of the tight strangle-hold we can sometimes put on life? The best thing I ever did was to learn to accept life as it comes! Always a pleasure to see something from you in my RR box! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Surya]

My pleasure....Thank you, Margie...:)

[wordman]

life is usually on the spur of the moment,when we plan love it falls apart,or should i say our moves
it just happens..... loved the unique write

[Surya]

Thank you, wordman...:)

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[Priyanshi]

Your poems are always unique.From starting till ending, each line is beautiful.
specially these lines
Destiny in life is
A spark of magic,
A denizen unknown, and
Manoeuver of mistakes ...and the second and third stanza also.

[Surya]

unique....::)))
Thank you so much...:)