Self Perceptions

Sometimes I get up in the morning and already feel ugly.

Then I remember Everybody feels ugly sometimes.

And Everybody is not ugly! ;)

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

Lol .. this poem makes me chuckle. It`s very nice and yeah .. when we awake up in the morning, no one loves to see the face ... but yeah, everybody loves watching the face. What a great thought you came up with .. you always make me surprise with your wonderful art ;) Nice poem.

[stars are far]

Yeah that is so true, i do have this feeling sometimes but then i just move on to life and ugh i see some real ugly people who are cruel and selfish..so yeah . this writing have the concept of "believe in yourself ".
well done :)

[Susie]

I am pleased that you understand the "heart" of this short poem so well. Thanks for reading!! :D

[stars are far]

my pleasure :)

[A. Amos]

Now that was one cool write, truly enjoyed...

[Susie]

Thank you for reading! Hehe. I don't usually write this bluntly but sometimes you don't need many words, do you. xx

[A. Amos]

That's true my friend and you're most welcome

[Leslii Jupetis]

This is a good concept. May I suggest you find another word besides "ugly" to use one of the times? Unless that is the point of your poem, to have ugly 3 times in which case I think you pulled burning quite well.

[Paula]

Now there's some cognitive medicine if ever I've heard! Nice. :)

[Susie]

Why thank you Sweet! I don't usually write so bluntly but sometimes, at least when I'm being spoken to, "blunt" is called for. hehe Thanks for reading! xo

[Devesh]

Agreed! You really pack a punch in these lines, the feeling is something we can all relate to. Thanks for sharing :)

[Susie]

Thank you both. I don't usually write so bluntly but sometimes, at least when I'm being spoken to, "blunt" is called for. hehe Thanks for reading! xo

[Devesh]

It most certainly is :P You're welcome! :) FYI, you should comment on Paula's review separately, she won't recieve a notif for this and probably won't see that you wanted to thank her. :)

[Susie]

Ahh good call. I usually reply on my laptop - the setup was different on my smartphone and I didn't realise I was replying only to you. Thanks Devesh x

[Devesh]

You're most welcome, Susie :)