Serenity

Lets sit below the cerpuscular light

Just you me and our little angel ,beneath my soft clutch

The evergreen periphery of this countryside

The ravens screaming and flying right beside these ears

 

Piano and guitars assonance

From the church backyard

Along with the growling corn field sounds

Here we hear the corals and chants

 

Its not the Sistine chapel

But serenity is just so enduring

The cryptic redolence along the long yard

Is something just astounding….

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The good description took me to good places and thoughts. I liked the use of the music. I like the calmness and tone of the words. Allowing the reader to fall into the good words and thoughts. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Saraswati]

tahnk you for sharing your thoughts on this :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[MsJewel]

You have created some beautiful images for the reader to enjoy, but more than that I love the soft feel of your words - yes - serenity. truly...

:) Julie

[Saraswati]

Thank you dear :)

[Botania]

Hmmm. Nice here. Especially like the thought of music filling your and your loved one's existence coming from a church "along the long yard." Haha. Fields of green. Love this imagery. Well done. Thoughts travel back to little angel. Aww :)

[Saraswati]

yes..hope it took you to a state of trance :)