present continuous...

the decent forest
started growing into
a wild one
as you
looked upon...

,..

Reviews

[Namrata]

Power in such short lines inspire me a lot. And the title speaks for itself.

[Swaroop Manikandan]

great that you liked it... :-)

[escherflight]

and that wildness could be interpreted in so many different ways.

[Swaroop Manikandan]

or course, yes...

[Wynter Page]

short and powerful,
very intelligent choice of wording.

[Swaroop Manikandan]

thanks Wynter :-)

[priya]

sometimes a single line has a more profound effect on you than a whole book. :)

[Swaroop Manikandan]

true... thanks for the review...

[priya]

my pleasure..

[Gurleen Saluja]

a short and sweet write :)

[Swaroop Manikandan]

thanks Gurleen...

[Gurleen Saluja]

you are welcome

[Frozen Eyes]

Could sunshine perforate through the opaque wilderness of green??

[Swaroop Manikandan]

you should tell us :-)

[Frozen Eyes]

will try to soon.. present continued ... :)

[Swaroop Manikandan]

yup . . . :-)

[Matching Socks]

These short poems are always the ones that provoke most thought.
: ) almost like reading a fortune cookie.
Nice one.

[Swaroop Manikandan]

thank you dear...

[Sophy Freebirds]

A single line conveying deep thoughts... good write

~Sophy

[Swaroop Manikandan]

thanks Sophy for the review...