The Beast . . .

It's with the knack of

an elegant tigress

that your eyes approach me.

With this burning desire 

to be a beast again,

I every time

jump off my safety,

just to fall prey to

the unconquerable battle

thereof. 

,..

Reviews

[Namrata]

Wow. To know how you wanna fall for her, it is fierce and so seductive in itself. Innate wild instinct, you stir, or she does.

[Frozen Eyes]

Sweep her off her feet or fall prey to the temptress.. either way the fire will burn and there will be ashes...
well written :)

[Swaroop Manikandan]

ashes and then a phoenix . . .

[Sophy Freebirds]

Ahhh... the call for being wild.. !! An intense write.. Rawwr!!

~Sophy

[Lauriegirl]

Heart and soul has gone into these lines!! You write from your heart .. I love that..

[Tom]

Beware the beast indeed !

[Swaroop Manikandan]

Yup :-) . . .

[Sophy Freebirds]

Yea tom.. its your beast.. lol :D

[Tom]

You're so observant Sophy !

[Sophy Freebirds]

Heck!! I am.. :) when its come to the beast i relate it to you..

[Tom]

Grrrr ?..is that a compliment I hope lol ?

[Sophy Freebirds]

Yoo buddy.. it is! ! I like your roar.. :p. Lol (compliment)