In the home of Death

Heavenly sinned and heavenly cursed

No more do i want anymore

I want to die

Become a holy ghost 

And give pain to everyone

I want to go to my eternal home

-The home of death

There i hear the news

Of my death

People sobbing and weeping

Thinking of me 

This gives me a feeling of thrill

Reviews

[Pushkar Prabhat]

very dark and creepy...........
"I want to go to my eternal home
-The home of death
There i hear the news
Of my death
People sobbing and weeping
Thinking of me
This gives me a feeling of thrill"
makes me wonder, why?

nicely done......
i liked it!
:)
p.s. maybe you meant 'heavily' instead of 'heavenly'.

[swathi]

no not really ........ i meant to say ive been sinned and cursed from people all over including people in heaven....so

[Pushkar Prabhat]

okay that makes sense!! :) :)

[swathi]

yeah...........

[Pushkar Prabhat]

..........................:):):):):)