A day at the beach

The sun on my face

The sand on my toes

Makes any day a delight

Hunting for seashells

Surfing the waves

Makes everything seem alright

Building a castle

Fit for a king

Makes all my dreams come true

Wearing my shades and getting a tan

Makes a perfect day at the beach

Reviews

[Pushkar Prabhat]

"The sun on my face

The sand on my toes

Makes any day a delight

Hunting for seashells

Surfing the waves

Makes everything seem alright"

bravo.....
refreshing poem!!!
i liked it!!
keep up the good work!
:)

[swathi]

tnx a lot. wrote this a year n a half back..

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome.......well, it will never grow old! :) :)

[swathi]

oh thanks...........but now i really find it difficult to write one like this....damn difficult
read moreoh thanks...........but now i really find it difficult to write one like this....damn difficult

[swathi]

its bcz i dont feel like this at all

[Pushkar Prabhat]

well try reading others' poems and go take a walk on the beach or something......i am sure you will find something helpful in the course section of this site.......we all have to deal with writer's block!!
happy writing!!
good luck
:)