Laughing Tears

My teeth hurting

My fingers burning

Because of a cloud of sadness

Everything around me is happy

But I’m unable to laugh

I’m trying to laugh

 And Laughter turns to tears

What do I do? How do I stop this?

Someone give me an answer

And I’ll live a life of happiness

Reviews

[Pushkar Prabhat]

this is amazing.....
try "laughing tears" " tears of laughter"

[swathi]

thank you.... im going to surely put one of these

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome.............:) :)

[swathi]

did u like it????

[Pushkar Prabhat]

yes i did......!!! :) :)

[swathi]

n i dont necessarily feel all of this

[Pushkar Prabhat]

hehe.........its okay...........we all have our area of expertise.....that doesn't mean we are it!!! :) :)

[swathi]

i cant write what i think......... my problem

[Pushkar Prabhat]

that one, have ,we all!!

[swathi]

can someone suggest a title for this poem............