Wendy

***I am no longer working on "Wendy." Folks are welcome to make comments, but I will not be reciprocating reviews any more.

Thank you to all who helped me with "Wendy." I wish you all good fortune in all of your writing endeavors.***

This is my first attempt at fiction. It has a lot of problems in basic structure, problems that really can't be fixed unless i just completely throw the entire thing away. I don't plan on doing that. This is an exercise for me, how to fine tune writing once it is on the page, make the best of what you've got. The things that are inherent are: predictability of plot and sort of cliché characters.However, any and all comments are welcome. I thank you for reading my story and taking the time and effort to give me feedback. Cheers!