Unrequited Love, nothing but a Lie

I wrote this for the contest "Poetry in 3 lines" Not sure if it's really still going on, but it was fun to do either way.

Longing for what cannot be obtained, and

Imagining what cannot be attained, while

Embracing loneliness and suffering

Reviews

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Affirmative! I know that all to well. Your poem is simple, well put and true!

[Sweet]

Thanks ^_^ I feel you on this. I wrote this more for fun, for a contest that never ended lol. Glad it wasn't all in vain =D

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You're very welcome! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard to want something we cannot have. You said a lot in the short poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Sweet]

Thank you for reading it :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Inject Positivity]

I can understand the emotions of this write, unrequited love is never easy, it takes a big heart to do that... It's like walking on fire knowing that it will burn... To the point write... Well done...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Sweet]

Thank you for reviewing this poem Dhiman. I agree, it's something very difficult to deal with, even more if we get our hopes up and can't manage to let go.

[Kuro]

I would suggest using lie in the title. Maybe "The Lie of Unrequited Love'.

[Sweet]

Hello Kuro. Thank you very much for your review. I'm kinda busy this week but will definitely look into it ^_^