Nightly Twinkle

Dark, bright, light shining,

showing the starry night sky,

sleeping near the blue moon.

Author's Note

One of my first Haikus..

Reviews

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I like the image that you convey here. There is something magical about the night sky, and the moon and stars. The only point that I raise is that the third line has one too many syllables. Your poem goes 5,7,6. But I like this one a lot. Very nicely felt.