Dreams and Ashes

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Does the moon fulfill
each wish with radiance?
or does the sun burn
sweet dreams into ashes?
Does the wind carry thoughts
to far away places?
    while the moon fills passion
in our hearts,
Or does twilight peak
as rapture consumes the air;
    lusting until tomorrow night
when darkness can be shared?

 

©SyberRose

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading...Warmly SyberRose

Reviews

[Anjali]

It's really good! I loved it. Keep writing.

[Sami Khalil]

I think lovers can answer those great questions. Or forlorn ones...:)
A wonderful write...:)

[SyberRose]

I'm glad you liked it Sami...nice to hear from you as always:)

[Sami Khalil]

I do. You are welcome...:)

[James Paulin]

Having just read several of your poems I am impressed with your romanticism and your allusions to intimacy which inspire the imagination. High quality with a feminine touch.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much...I am happy you enjoyed my words James...thank you for reading...SyberRose

[jacob erin-cilberto]

quite nice mix of nature and love...

complex in its simplicity...a well worded poem that relays the passion of love.

[SyberRose]

Thank you very much Jacob...I'm so glad you enjoyed...I will have to peek in and read your poems...SyberRose

[EileenMarie]

So true...... very meaningful! Leaves me wondering........ Great write!

[SyberRose]

Thank you Eileen and for peeking in today...SyberRose

[zainul]

Very lovely piece.
I am very impressed by its beauty.

[SyberRose]

Thank you zainul...I wrote it a long time ago...when I had a dark romance website...appreciate your nice comments....SyberRose

[zainul]

You are most welcome.
I love your unique style