Moonflower

A visit from a moonflower.

 The blossom of the moon
blooming tenderly,
as golden petals scent the breeze
blushing lovingly...

Sweetness drifts into his window
touching softly his skin,
A moonflower is shining tonight
breathing closely to him...

Laying gently upon his pillow
petals of golden hair
Whispers upon his neck
while in a slumber, unaware...

Radiant upon the stem of night
is a moonflower bare.

 

©SyberRose

Author's Note

Thank you for reading...Warmly SyberRose

Reviews

[Nestor Gonzalez]

amazing :D

[SyberRose]

thank you for visiting...SyberRose

[Marie]

Font style is nice, but the images and sweetness of the poem are more important to me.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Marie...It is lovely to hear from you and nice to meet you also.
SyberRose

[Wórdsmíth]

That's pretty nice, cup of coffeee makes our mornin'...you got me, that's a nice one write indeed. your words;re quite interestin', but the imp. thing that i got...is your font style, that's pretty nice too, very nice write.
wish you luck for your next writin'

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much orton...so happy you enjoyed...yes the font style...I think its verdana or something like that and its italic instead of bold....SyberRose

[Chris]

Coffee at hand and a bright morning sun...this left a smile.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much...I am glad you enjoyed...I am drinking my coffee too..

[Chris]

Have you a "morning" poem perchance?

[SyberRose]

Im sure I do...I have one about apple butter haa

[jerrypat]

You've painted a pretty darn good picture of of sleeping sensual arrangements as the moon flower "gently whispers upon his neck." I like that.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Jerry...and good morning to you...you will be dreaming of a moonflower tonight...SyberRose

[jerrypat]

Maybe so . . . Hopefully . . .

[Frieda P]

Sweet & sensual at the same time...like a warm embrace. Lovely.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Frieda...nice of you to stop by tonight...I appreciate it...SyberRose

[Frieda P]

Pleasure was mine.

[Rita L. Sev]

This is lovely, sensual and innocent at the same time. Nicely written.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Rita...Nice to hear from you tonight...hugsss....SyberRose

[Rose Kavanagh]

This poem is very soothing and pleasant. I especially like the line "blushing with romance" which strikes me as so romantic and pretty without being over-the-top.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Rose...and thats a beautiful photo you have there...SyberRose

[Rose Kavanagh]

thank you :)

[jwesley]

Ah, would only the moon touch me that way ... well done, my friend...

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Jimmy...nice to hear from you today...SyberRose
Hope you are enjoying your stay so far.

[Just Kim]

This is ever so lovely...
thanx for your review.

[SyberRose]

Thank you and you are very welcome...SyberRose