Eerie Doll Eyes

Someone is Watching.

Between orchid rain and deep purple skies

are lavender cosmos and Eerie doll eyes...

Entangled within silken webs of night

whispers swirling within a serpentine light.

 

Charcoal driftwood in sea of reminise;

caught within the sighs of a passionate kiss...

Leafy voices stalk shadows in the trees

footprints upon sand, creeping in the breeze.

 

The scent of passion in moonlight dreams

intoxicates the unknown with moonlit beams...

Shadowy fingers gently fondle air

placing a rosebud in soft chestnut hair.

 

Within the slumber of night, unaware

Eerie doll eyes in a mirror they stare.

 

©SyberRose

Author's Note

Thank you for reading...Warmly,SyberRose

Reviews

[Anne Bathory]

I feel like you took the somewhat cliche moment in horror movies between two teens who are caught unawares in the midst of their lovemaking and made it into something stupendous!
A terrific read!

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much for your kind comments...I appreciate your visit today...Rose:)

[Jake Botha]

Great poem. Love the opening line.

[SyberRose]

Thanks jake...Im glad you enjoyed...I appreciate your comments today.

[Daydreamer54]

I ove how lyrical this poem was and how greatly it fowed together. wonderful write! ^^

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much...I am happy you enjoyed...SyberRose

[NibbleLove]

That's really good! :D

[SyberRose]

thank you Amber...thank you for your nice comments...SyberRose

[NibbleLove]

:)

[Rachael]

wow! I love this one, it gave me the chills to. I like the suspense at the end!

[SyberRose]

Thank you Rachael..I just entered the photo today too.

[Rita L. Sev]

Your lovely poem gave me a chill! Great write!

[SyberRose]

Thank you again Rita...Glad you enjoyed eerie doll eyes.