Rejuvenate Our Love

Bathing in hot springs

 

Come bathe in hot springs of the earth
Splurging as if in a bordello,
Among fragrance of magnolia trees;
 While relaxing to strings of a cello...

Come bathe with me in our symphony
Where natural minerals heal and invite;
Within the rocky mountains majesty,
And heavenly skies of lavender bright...

Bathe in the hot pools of the earth
Where the grazing mountain sheep roam;
And the wonderous feeling of rebirth,
Beneath darkness and heavens starry dome...

Rejuvenate love in mist of hot springs
Vitality of mind, and spirit sings.

©SyberRose

　

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Stella Armour]

so relaxing Rose, a beautiful way to be rejuvenated.... almost spiritual in it's mood. Hot springs sound delightful whether real or metaphorical..

[SyberRose]

Thank you Stella...sounds good to me too...I made it sound like a fountain of youth haa

[Stella Armour]

well i could do with a dip in there then..lol

[SyberRose]

haa...me too

[quinfinn]

i love this, makes me wanna go find a hot spring and lavish in its warmth. gorgeous poetry!

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Quinn...yes thats for sure...glad you enjoyed reading. Rose

[quinfinn]

you're welcome!

[Sami Khalil]

A very soothing write of rebirth in nature and the aftermath of healing... An artist indeed...:)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Sami...yes I will have to find one of those soothing hot springs ha.

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...Wonderful idea... Life can be hectic...:)