Do You Love Me?

 

Do you love me from deep within your heart?
That secret place where the seeds of love grow.
Do you love me like your sculptured piece of  art?
With slender curves from breast to tip of toe.

 

Do you love me like your painting by Van Gogh?
A painting of olive groves and orange skies.
Do you love me  like your wine from Bordeaux?
As I dine within your lips and your eyes.

 

Do you love me like moods of DeBussy?
His  "La Mer" or his "Claire de Lune"
Do you love me like a symphony?
Tides of the sea and light of the moon.

 

Would you like to compose sheet music alone?
A Sonata of sweet movements of our own.

 

©SyberRose
 

Author's Note

thank you for reading.

Reviews

[icelandicblue]

This is lovely and soft. The imagery that you use to compare love to is really artistic and inviting. This is really beautiful.

[SyberRose]

thank you so much...I appreciate your comments...thank you for peeking in.
Rose

[Tate Morgan]

This is an interesting piece .To know the mind of another.Well as poets it is always a blessing to be able to share our feelings not just our observations.I like the feel of this and of course I think Id love to think my own feelings were as rich and wondrous as though of Van Gogh. I have failed at love many times But never abandoned it. I hope you are the same
Beautiful piece here

[SyberRose]

Thank you Tate...Well Im sure you are a nice memory to someone...nice to hear from you...Rose

[Stella Armour]

what a beautiful love sonata that would be.....

[SyberRose]

Thank you dear...nice to see you tonight...hugss

[Stella Armour]

you too Rose... (hug)

[WILDERNESS]

beautiful wordings and a beautiful poem.....................a treat indeed

[SyberRose]

thank you so much...nice to hear from you today...and I do appreciate your comments...Rose

[WILDERNESS]

You r welcome dear...............and your poems are so refreshing, reflecting an enlightened soul.

[SyberRose]

Thank you for that

[Frieda P]

Your rhyme is divine and I could hear the music playing within this piece, very lovely tune, I like this one a lot Rose.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Frieda...I am glad you enjoyed...thanks for peeking in today...Rose

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. I love all the questions you have asked and the flow and feelings of this poem. You are excelling...:)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Sami...so nice of you to say...thank you for peeking in...Rose

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[Chris]

The rhythm stumbles. The content and rhyme work.

[SyberRose]

Good morning Chris...I will work on it...thank you for peeking in..Rose

[Chris]

Welcome

[Haim Kadman]

The poem is done very beautifully and impressively, and it doesn't express doubts but a curiosity to know the depth of love. Thanks dear Rose I've enjoyed reading very much.

[SyberRose]

thank you Haim...well that pleases me that you enjoyed my poem...and thank your for peeking in and taking time to read...Rose

[jacob erin-cilberto]

okay wow...i love "claire de lune" one of my favorite instrumentals...just hearing that in my head gave this poem all the mood it needed...

you almost make me like rhyme...you are so smooth and natural with it.

nice piece

jacob

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Jacob...I always appreciate your comments...glad you enjoyed my words....Rose