Her Mona Lisa Smile

Lauri Blank/Artist

Enchanted by her Mona Lisa smile,

and softness of her creamy fresco skin.

The whirlpool of her baby blues

seduced like a bow to a violin.

She tortured him in the bedroom of her eyes.

discreetly glanced at him and looked away.      

While the moon undressed their pleasures

intoxicated by violet bouquet.

His fingers caressed elderberry hair,

and tasted the sweet vineyard of her lips.

He succumbed to the bedroom of her eyes,

surrendering to orchards of paradise.

©SyberRose

Author's Note

Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[Stella Armour]

those seductive eyes have lured many men towards her, and her all knowing smile frames the" bedroom of her eyes"..i just love that phrase Rose...

[SyberRose]

Thank you dear...glad you enjoyed...HUGSS

[Rita L. Sev]

Superb sensuality and imagery. Very nice, Rose!

[SyberRose]

Thank you Rita...nice to hear from you today...hugss

[Leslie Philibert]

I like this a lot, a poem full of sensual, rich imagery, well put together, erotic poetry with style, good job..

[SyberRose]

Thank you Leslie...I'm glad you enjoyed Mona Lisa Smile...thank you for peeking in.
Rose

[Luna Evangeline]

What a discreet and lovely way to describe a beautiful woman and a man's infatuation. Your metaphors are simple, making the reading easy, and the flow of the poem is unbroken. Sometimes poets try to incorporate metaphors and double-meanings that tamper with the rhythm of their work.

I'd have to say that my favorite stanza is the first, because you set the scene without just dully listing what is happening. You showed us this lady in a way that is unique and interesting.

I'm not much of a poetry reviewer, so I do not have much more to say. Your grammar and spelling is flawless. Great write.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much for your nice response PJ...appreciate your comments...Rose

[Rogue]

This is quite an elegant write. Lovely wording and imagery.

"She tortured him in the bedroom of her eyes."

Love this line. :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you for peeking in tonight Rogue...I'm glad you enjoyed...Rose

[Sami Khalil]

"She tortured him in the bedroom of her eyes.
discreetly glanced at him and looked away.
While the moon undressed their pleasures
intoxicated by violet bouquet."
This write makes a man smile like a Mona Lisa or for this matter any Lisa ...Excellent...:)

[SyberRose]

Hi Sami...thank you so much...I'm happy you enjoyed my poem tonight...Rose

[Sami Khalil]

I did. My pleasure...Have a great weekend...:)