Candlelight Bay

Painting by Waterhouse

Come stroll the sandy dunes of Candlelight Bay

I plead do not let time take you away

Do not let my memory in your mind ever stray

Remember upon our lips the taste of Cabernet

Shared within our love of Candlelight Bay

 

Let us leave forever footprints upon the shore

Grains of sand in the wind forever we will soar

Only time will take you away my paramour

 

Forever in the night our bodies will sway

Upon the shores dancing in Candlelight Bay

Forever we will drift in the wind like bouquet

Our sweet memories will never melt like sorbet

And if the hand of time invites me to dance away

I will return as a mermaid in Candlelight Bay

 

©SyberRose

 

Author's Note

thank you for reading...i wrote this a long time ago...my writing is different now then it was then.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"Let us leave forever footprints upon the shore

Grains of sand in the wind forever we will soar

Only time will take you away my paramour



Forever in the night our bodies will sway

Upon the shores dancing in Candlelight Bay"
Wow. How did I miss this one. I saw Quinn reviewing so I had to check...Bravo...:)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Sami...well im glad you enjoyed Candlelight Bay...Im glad you found it haa...:)

[Sami Khalil]

Very enjoyable...You are welcome...:)

[quinfinn]

this reminds me of a fred and ginger dance routine....for some odd reason (yeh, i know i am telling my age here) but i could see them dancing and hear fred astaire crooning it for some reason. it paints a beautiful painting in lavish words and blissful imagery. well penned!

[SyberRose]

Thank you Quin...oh yes Fred and Ginger...I think I remember them haa...:)

[quinfinn]

i am an old fool, Rose...but i love the old musicals...and i adore the antics of danny kaye to this day!

[Peter H]

very well written piece :) i loved the imagery it was very dynamic and majestic

[SyberRose]

Thank you for peeking in tonight and commenting...Rose

[~Nina~]

Amazing use of imagery; I could picture "Candlelight Bay" in my head. Fascinating, keep up the great work!

[SyberRose]

Thank you Nina...I wrote it a long time ago and thought I would post it...Rose:)