A Secret Hideaway

I loved you to the point of no return

you were my heart, my love, and my soul

the morning and the night for you I yearned

the whisper of your voice made my heart toll

In the wick of candlelight we slow danced

our hideaway of secrets we made love

two bodies held tightly and entranced

molded together like a silken glove

Two silhouettes in the light of the moon

you were mine until the dawns morning light

as in our dance our bodies stayed in tune

held in your arms, within solace of night

Forever in my memory you will be

my heart will cling like the roots of a tree.

©SyberRose

Reviews

[Soma-ko]

Absolutely lovely poem, and the painting goes terrific with it. Young love, elder love, new love, old love, it simply does not matter. Your poem beautifully describes the affection two people have towards each other, and the imagery is wonderful. Great poem, and much enjoyed.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Soma...yes I love the painting too...glad you enjoyed this:)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. You create a good vision and place for the reader. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[SyberRose]

Thank you Coyote...Im happy you enjoyed...and thanks for peeking in..Rose:)

[Sami Khalil]

"In the wick of candlelight we slow danced

our hideaway of secrets we made love

two bodies held tightly and entranced

molded together like a silken glove




Two silhouettes in the light of the moon

you were mine until the dawns morning light"
Wickedly beautiful ...Marvelous ...:)

[Tate Morgan]

The end of this was absolutely divine

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Tate...glad you enjoyed...nice to hear from you...Rose:)

[Tate Morgan]

You are welcome dear. I am trying to spend a bit of time here today . and play a bit

[SyberRose]

Good...have fun ha...:)

[SteveB]

"My heart will cling like the roots of a tree". Lovely line. In fact a number of lovely lines. I liked the balance between the solace of the night and the until of dawn.
Well done.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Steve...I appreciate your comments...Rose:)

[quinfinn]

wow, you know...i have memories of times like these, and they are some of my most treasured . your wording just adds icing to this very sweet and scrumptious cake...i find myself wanting another slice. i think you have a very deep heart and a soul which is not new to this world. well penned!

[SyberRose]

thank you for reading Quin...Im glad you can relate to the poem...Rose

[quinfinn]

absolutely!