Sombrero Of The Sun

The accent of your voice 

 dangles like a puppet

in a Mexicali bar~

Singing like a mariachi

upon my mind...

You hold the passport

to all my affections

 crossing

sweltering borders of love

beneath the fiery sombrero

 of the sun...

Whispering in a language

of our own,

Blushing

 like pink flamingos

 dancing within our hearts.

©SyberRose

Author's Note

thank you for reading.

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I love the way you set this Mexican scene so artfully, a fine poem.

[SyberRose]

Thank you very much Sheema and i'm glad you enjoyed...:)

[quinfinn]

i love this, it literally sings itself off the page! you do have a gift for the romantic, dear Rose. i have been jaded though to pink flamingos by an old movie which was quite distasteful ...it bore that name. well written my dear!

[SyberRose]

Thank you Quin...glad you liked and thanks for peeking in...:)

[s y e]

Oh Rose, you have such a wonderful gift. Your writing is absolutely spectacular and the image is amazing. This was a lovely 'warm' write, ha! See what I done there? :P Anyhoo, nicely done, hun. I loved it. :D

~ Noodle.

[SyberRose]

Thank you very much Sye...you are too kind...nice hearing from you...Ill come visit you next.:)

[s y e]

My pleasure, Rose x

[Stella Armour]

lovely warm imagery here Rose...

[SyberRose]

Thank you Stella...hugss

[Sarah Khalil]

You have a gift for these luscious images that burrow into your head and stay right there as you read. Your reds and pinks are fiery like the love that is shared here.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Sarah...and thank you for taking time to comment today...Ill come visit you next...:)

[Sami Khalil]

Hot slasa dancing in a great poetic form where the Mexican sun is burning with passion on the sandy beaches of tropical climes...Well done...:)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Sami...actually I wrote this after a vacation in San Diego and visiting Tijuana and seeing all the puppets on sale..haa...thanks for visiting...:)

[Sami Khalil]

It must have been fun...You are welcome...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and amazing poetry took me to a good place. Description create good vision and thoughts.
"The accent of your voice
dangles like a puppet
in a Mexicali bar~"
I like the above lines a lot. Sweet and kind voices can take us to good places. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[SyberRose]

Thank you Coyote..yes I loved the artwork too...Rose:)