No Taboo

             

           Tell me your fantasy, I will make it come true

Nothing I would not do...not do for you~

      We can bask in the sun, or I make you a souffle

       Take you to the Alps and make love in a chalet...

              I will write a sonnet, or a Rondeau

           Bathe you in champagne, or even Bordeaux

          Tell me your fantasy, I will make it come true

                Whatever it is, there will be no taboo...

             Lay you down, give you a gentle massage

                 Nothing unattainable, not a mirage

           I will kiss you all over, you will be in ecstasy

             To the French music, of Claude Debussy...

         I will bring you flowers, from a garden of snow

           I will build you a castle, or a French chateau

            And dance for you, in my private bedroom

            Only wearing a veil, and sweet perfume...

          Tell me your fantasy, I will make it come true

          Nothing I would not do, not do for you~

©SyberRose

Author's Note

Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[ANTO]

Oh WOW Rose - again and again you score! You are in the Premiership! (sorry about the soccer references).
"We can bask in the sun, or I make you a souffle" - this is my fantasy here - simple yet sublime, souffle in the sun.
I could read you all day.

[SyberRose]

ha...thank you...I dont think I ever made a souffle ha...but glad you enjoyed Anthony...Rose:)

[Rahul]

Imagination's great, thoughtful piece of writing.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Rahul...I'm happy you enjoyed this piece...Rose:)

[Vikrantsingh]

Lovely crafted and narrated Rose :)
Pretty Amazing felt throughout this poem :)

Best Lines : -
I will write a sonnet, or a Rondeau
Bathe you in champagne, or even Bordeaux
Tell me your fantasy, I will make it come true
Whatever it is, there will be no taboo...

Cheers!
Singh :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Singh and for taking time to comment...I'm glad you enjoyed...Rose:)

[Vikrantsingh]

Yes i really enjoyed it :)

[Sarah Khalil]

My favorite line here is "I will bring you flowers, from a garden of snow". What a pretty image! Thank you for sharing, Rose :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you again Sarah...and for peeking in today...I'm happy you enjoyed:)

[WILDERNESS]

most beautiful, astounding. while i was reading this poem i was listening to a sonata and the effect was mesmerizing. go publish ur work D Rose, you r superb ................
PS can I be that guy :)

[SyberRose]

Oh really ....a sonata...how lovely...I'm glad you liked it...haa awww what a compliment that is...:)

[WILDERNESS]

My pleasure ..

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Splendid read and write, Ms. Rose. Bravo!

[SyberRose]

Thank you Brandon...Nice to see you peeking in...:)

[Brandon S. Whitten]

You are welcome and it is my pleasure.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

like carly simon..."whoever you want is exactly who i'm more than willing to be"

i really like the "flowers from a garden of snow" great paradox there...and the "Debussy" stanza is wonderful in its analogy to the classic music...there will be classic passion...

and there will be, as described in this beautiful piece of writing.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Jacob...Yes,The Youre So Vain girl ha..Im glad you enjoyed this piece:)

[Another Poet]

That was really cool! I adore your poems. I want read this over and over again.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much...Im glad you enjoyed it...:)

[Another Poet]

your welcome!

[Deuces]

"No taboo" is the way to be. As the first piece I've reviewed of yours, I certainly look forward to more. This was quite the treat and I am a huge fan of the rhyme... you're skilled with it.

Now I want a souffle...

[SyberRose]

One souffle coming up ha...thanks for peeking in Cyntax...appreciate your visit:)

[Rita L. Sev]

This is the offer we make to the one who holds our heart - very nice, well written, great flow. Wonderful write, Rose!

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much sweetie...nice to here from you...:)