Would You?

Painting by Billie Feng

Would you like to spend the night?

listening to the raindrops fall

While the ecstasy of the rain

flows with passion down the wall~

Would you like to spend the night?

wrapped in my love so warm

While the candle flickers with desire

while our shadows tremble in the storm~

Would you like to spend the night?

in our dark wonderland

And the only thing I wear

is just one pearl on a strand~

Would you like to spend the night?

under a canopy of lace

On ivory sheets of satin

in our silhouetted embrace~

©SyberRose

Author's Note

Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[SteveB]

Very nicely done, Well structured, well composed, and an elegant sensual write.
BRAVA!

[SyberRose]

thank you again Steve and for peeking in...Rose

[john alan willox]

yes i would !!! and maybe stay the morning to do it all again b!!!

[SyberRose]

thank you John...yes and for lunch too haa...Rose:)

[Stella Armour]

sensual and gorgeous Rose.. you are a master of romantic poems...

[SyberRose]

Thank you Stella...I'm happy you enjoyed this piece...hugss

[smilempsn]

That flowed like a song... I like it.. :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much for dropping by...Rose:)

[Mark]

The best part of a night with someone you care is the intimacy of it. For awhile, the loneliness is beaten back and there is togetherness. I can feel it in these words. Very nice.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Mark and taking time to read tonight...I'm glad you enjoyed it...Rose:)

[NA]

Oh so very beautiful...enjoyed :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you again Raven...glad you enjoyed it...:)

[BL]

A question to which there can only be one answer, yes. A beautiful and sensual write

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Bluely...and thank you for the nice visit today...Rose:)

[BL]

Thank your poem it drew me in

[ANTO]

I'd forgotten how we can tremble in anticipation of the 'union' - thanks for helping me remember SyberRose.

[SyberRose]

Thank you and you are welcome Anthony...Rose:)

[Dhaye]

A sensual poem...

"Would you like to spend the night?
in our dark wonderland
And the only thing I wear
is just one pearl on a strand~"

This is captivating. I like the use of Anaphora, too.
Nice job!

[SyberRose]

Thank you very much Dhaye...and for peeking in today:)

[Roopal]

"While the candle flickers with desire
while our shadows tremble in the storm"

I love the way you imagine things. This is a very nice romantic piece of art. I love every part of it, specially the lat stanza. :) Keep writing. My best wishes. :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Roopal and you keep writing too dear...thanks for peeking in...Rose:)