My Butterfly

Painting by Josephine Wall

You are my butterfly

free to come and go

Not a prisoner of my love

with boundaries to and fro

You are my butterfly

fluttering in the wind~

 

I give my love freely

each time we meet

You are my butterfly

gift wrapped in discreet~

 

The breeze of enchantment

Sometimes will lift you away,

But always will return

to the sand of hearts bay.

 

©SyberRose

Author's Note

thank you for reading.

Reviews

[rhythm&blues]

Such a lovely piece, the image, and your poem are a perfect match.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much...and thanks for peeking in tonight:)

[ANTO]

"The breeze of enchantment
Sometimes will lift you away,
But always will return
to the sand of hearts bay"

I love the subjects confidence that when all is said and done - their heart is always the final destination of the wandering entity.
Gorgeous Rose
X

[SyberRose]

Thank you Anthony...and so nice hearing from you as always...Ill have to peek in and see if you have anything new posted....:)

[ANTO]

Thats why I like you so much Rose - you're kind and considerate among other beautiful qualities
read moreThats why I like you so much Rose - you're kind and considerate among other beautiful qualities
X

[Mark]

That is what love should be isn't it? Gratitude for what is given, acceptance of what is not. Beautiful poem.

[SyberRose]

Yes you are so right...I'm glad you enjoyed it and thank you Mark for visiting this evening...Rose:)

[Mark]

always my pleasure sweet! :)

[s y e]

You gotta love 'em butterflies. A,axing as always, Rose. :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Sye...yes they are beautiful works of art...Rose:)

[Frieda P]

Breathtaking, I love butterflies, I had something lovely to say but I lost my train of thought when I realized mr keep the peace, took his usual swipe at me.

[SyberRose]

I was wondering what a flutterbie was ha...wasnt sure...thanks Frieda...:)

[Frieda P]

You're welcome Rose, and sorry about that....

[Stella Armour]

i love butterflies..they are so spiritual..

[SyberRose]

Hi dear...I bet you are tired from working on your book...they are beautiful little creatures...Hugs

[Stella Armour]

i have one on my shoulder...lol

[SyberRose]

haa...lucky you

[Stella Armour]

and a tiny one on my ankle

[SyberRose]

Do you mean tattoos?

[Stella Armour]

yes....☼...................

[SyberRose]

oh okay haa...my sister has a butterfly tattoo on her hip

[Stella Armour]

they are lovely, nicely done ...........

[Archangel Gabriel]

A soft poem with a deeper meaning. I feel either a lover or a woman who gives but allows her partner his freedoms?

[SyberRose]

Yes a mistress...I would say...thank you for peeking in and glad you liked it...:)

[quinfinn]

beautifully written.....i love butterflies/flutterbies....nice poem...even if recent association with butterflies gives me bad vibes i still love them. excellent write!

[SyberRose]

Thank you Quin and for peeking in again today...appreciate it:)

[victoria]

beautiful piece, i love butterflies. Lovely poem, one for the summer.

[SyberRose]

thank you Victoria...yes they are gorgeous works of art...Rose:)

[Saumya]

a vivid calm sootihing....and essentially, a lovely presentation....!!!
enjoyed reading...!!!
well done....!!

keep writing and rocking...!!

with best wishes.....

saumya

[SyberRose]

thank you Saumya and I will...and best wishes to you too:)

[Saumya]

alright....
most welcome dear..!! :)