Eerie Shadows

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Dark shadows in the wind ~ haunting in the breeze

The night in disguise ~ creeping in black chemise

Shadows dance until morning ~ then dance with the sun

 Thunder and lightning ~ play in the rain like a drum

Grey wolves howl at the moon ~ and the night stalks again

Whispers in the darkness ~ are voices of legends when

 Eyes scope the night ~ behind moonlight they embark

But whose eyes are they in the eeriness of the dark?

 

~SyberRose

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[David Scott]

Oh yes! I have seen the eyes in the darkness, or rather "felt" them.
Your poem helps this vision clear.
Simply spooky and beautiful!

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much David...and for taking time to read tonight...Rose

[NA]

Another awesome read....really enjoyed :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you again Raven...and for peeking in tonight:)

[Anne Bathory]

I enjoyed it tremendously, I am unsure at the moment but I think it would a bit more of an interesting read if you changed the word 'eeriness' in the final line. I have a bit of peeve for when a word is used more than twice or especially when a bit of the title is used outside of the 'title' phrase.
Otherwise, it's a wonderful read!

[SyberRose]

Thank you for taking time to read and ill consider what you suggested Anne...Rose:)

[Rita L. Sev]

I can't decide if this is dark or spiritual - I can see it both ways. Love the mystical feel to this piece - I think my favorite of yours to date. Well done!

[SyberRose]

Just a dark one...thanks for peeking in...and glad you liked it...different then my romantic ones.:)

[Rita L. Sev]

Definitely. Romance is nice, but I am partial to other themes.

[Archangel Gabriel]

A spooky feel yet mixed with floating ethereal phrases.

[SyberRose]

Yes but not too spooky ha...:)

[quinfinn]

why, it is my wolven brothers and sisters, of course~! when did you go getting all spooky and natural on me? superb piece~!

[SyberRose]

haa...well I'm glad you enjoyed this dark piece...I get tired of the mushy ones sometimes:)

[B-poet]

A witty and clever write. I like how you're always able to find the most fitting pictures that define the essence of your writings. Great work. An intriguing read. :)

[SyberRose]

thank you and yes its fun trying to find the right photo...glad you liked BPoet...:)

[Sami Khalil]

"Eerie shadows in the wind ~ haunting in the breeze

The night in disguise ~ creeping in black chemise

Shadows dance until morning ~ then dance with the sun"
This one is earily beautiful of meaning and imagery. Words are dancing in it ...:)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Sami...nice to see you peeking in as always...ha...happy you enjoyed it...:)

[Sami Khalil]

Peeking always at treasure...You are welcome...:)