Phantom Lovers

The breath of the midnight winds

echo in the starlight,

within the canyon walls

and desert of the night~

 

The lover she has longed

at last hers to keep

deep within the canyon

eternal wind sweep~

 

In the cool dark Arizona skies

phantom dust swirls;

two lovers become

natural wonders in disguise~

 

In the depths of dreams

if you listen very close

You may hear their voices

as mystic wind blows~

 

Embraced by the stars

ecstasies of voices cry

two spirits making love

deep eternal sighs~

 

At last she has her love

a dream now come true

never to say goodbye~

Within the Grand Canyon

and the Colorado River Sky.

 

©SyberRose

 

SyberRose

 

 

Author's Note

Thanks for peeking in.

Reviews

[Shaun Payton]

a beautiful painting with words and emotions, the art of love and admiration is inspiring

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much and now i will go and read yours...glad you enjoyed this piece...Rose:)

[Shaun Payton]

And While you do that I will go read some more!:) Poetry rules!

[Soul Cemetery]

loved the imagery in this. wonderful

[SyberRose]

thank you so much...Im happy you enjoyed it...:)

[s y e]

Wow Rose, this is an amazing write. Your title hooked me, I loved it. This is just the kinda thing I love. Awesome wording and again, loved the picture.

~ Noodle.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much dear...i'm so happy you enjoyed it Sye...Rose:)

[Stella Armour]

the atmosphere is very haunting Rose.. nicely penned..

[SyberRose]

Thank you Stella dear...nice to see you today...Hugss

[ShelleyA]

A beautiful write and presentation. Magical. Vivid imagery and descriptives that any reader can appreciate. Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm and use of enjambment. Excellent closing verse. Write on!

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Shelley...Glad you enjoyed this piece..Rose:)

[ShelleyA]

You're welcome.

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Simply amazing... you must wake up and drink a giant glass of love every morning. ;)

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much...I wish it was that easy ha...Rose

[Akshita]

i think u hav a mind beyond this word, nd bcoz of it u hav written such a beautiful poem.......

[SyberRose]

Thank you Akshita...and thank you for peeking in and commenting...Rose:)

[Pryde Foltz]

Lovely rhythm and great word choice. A very romantic piece.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Pryde...Im happy you enjoyed this piece...Rose:)

[ANTO]

Painting 100/100
Poem 100/100
Its like a John Denver song - just really takes you there
I don't know what I did before my daily Syber fix - but now Im hooked
X

[SyberRose]

Ahhh...thats sweet Anthony...im happy you enjoyed this piece...hugs

[Ency Bearis]

Beautiful lover's lane and with the lovers in the scene how romantic they are. Imagery well painted in words, very nice.

[SyberRose]

Hi Ency...thank you for taking time to read today...and i'm happy you enjoyed this piece:)