Honeydew Kisses

Honeydew kisses and misty soft whispers

flowing like a ripple in the streams

Let us enjoy our Smokey Mountain wine

while we bathe within crimson moonbeams~

 

Honeydew kisses and misty soft whispers

please uncork this yearning of mine

Tickle me with whispers of bluegrass

up and down the branch of my spine ~

 

Feverish lips drip with passion

as the full moon begins to rise

Let us seduce the southern lights

Beneath the Smokey Mountain skies~

 

©SyberRose

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

thank you for reading

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

so romantic ..we are new arrivals in the Ozark Mts. and just last week the "super moon" was aglow ..we have folk music in the square every Friday and Saturday while the weather holds ..i have much to relate to in this poem and enjoyed where it takes me romantically ..peace and joy my friend
E.

[s y e]

"Tickle me with whispers of bluegrass
up and down the branch of my spine ~"

I adore the way you write. You have such an amazing imagination that come up with some splendid writes that simply make me smile. I enjoy reading your work, Rose - kudos to you!

~ Noodle.

[SyberRose]

You are lucky you began writing at such a young age...I didnt start till way later in life.:)

[quinfinn]

beautifully penned, and thank you for the mountains. awesome write!

[SyberRose]

I loved that photo too and thank you for responding...:)

[Ency Bearis]

Beautiful picture and poem as well great write.

[SyberRose]

Thank you...yes i love that photo too:)

[Ency Bearis]

My pleasure.

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

You combine romance and nature so perfectly. "up and down the branch of my spine" wonderful, felt as if i should have been reading this under candle light.

[SyberRose]

haa...thank you so much Travis and i'm glad you liked it too...and don't forget to send me your RR's

[Ankita]

It's romantic and beautiful. While reading the poem one can feel the ambience that you have created in it. After the first reading I thought I like the second stanza the most. Reading it for the second time made me realize I love it all. :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Ankita...the second is my favorite ha...thanks for peeking in...Rose:)

[Angi]

I love the mountains, they make me feel just this way. Scuppernong wine is always easy on the tongue.. Lovely, Rose. Angi~

[SyberRose]

Thank you Angi...I'm glad you can relate to this...nice to hear from you tonight...Rose:)

[Stella Armour]

you are such a romantic Rose... another beautiful poem.... :o)

[SyberRose]

I know haa...its terrible isn't it ha...thank you for peeking in Stella...hugss

[Zeverin Kpai]

Wow I have so many questions and must admit that I should probably restrain from asking them. I like the decor.

[SyberRose]

Thank you for reading again today...I appreciate it...Rose

[Soma-ko]

This is another enjoyable piece. I just like how the poem sounds as I read it in my head. Another piece well crafted, and much enjoyed. :)

[SyberRose]

Im glad you liked it...thank you for peeking in again today...its pouring down rain here today.

[Soma-ko]

Not a drop here, and like always, it's a pleasure to read your works. :)